STORYBOARD — S2 Turn the Bottle Around — Solo × Green-Screen Stitch (UGC-native composite) [KD_C0080]
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Length
full variants A 1:20 · B 1:18 · C 1:18 (word-derived @182.5 wpm; see pause note)
Dynamic
solo/1p (Echo delivery mode D11 Green-Screen Reaction Stitch — mapped to v2 dynamic solo; the "second character" is a composited MEDIA source, not a second performer)
Setting
green-screen key composited to a UGC-native home plate — NOT a studio (review SOFT-6 constraint, speaker 3.5)
Speaker(s)
3.5 The 45-Year-Old "Newly Diagnosed" Peer Voice (UNTESTED archetype; D11 not on her Known-incompatible list — but Solo × Studio IS, so the composite must read UGC-native, never studio-polished). Alternate: 3.8 Younger UGC Mom if a higher-energy register tests better.
Visual Style
Donor-derived "green-screen accusation composite" — performer keyed beside/below a composited media wall she points at, accuses, and audits on camera; bold high-contrast sans overlays; a visual pop every 2–3s; jump cut on nearly every sentence; zero dead air; subtle driving beat with pop/whoosh SFX on every graphic entry
▸ Production target & sources
Script
S2 "Turn the Bottle Around" v1.1 (Echo 1×3: ONE locked body + THREE interchangeable hooks; v1.1 = the guarantee-line close fix, 2026-07-27 — this board carries the v1.1 close. Review round-2 verdict MINOR EDITS, 0 HARD / 7 SOFT; gates delegated, Zied 2026-07-23)
Production Target
REAL SHOOT — single performer on green screen, webcam/phone-native framing, keyed and composited in post over a stitch panel (Fork 1 option 4 + a post-composite layer). Every "co-star" asset is a real capture (retail listings, supplement-facts macros, own-site frames) or a practical macro — NO AI generation layer on the default path. Soul Cinema fallback exists but is degraded and flagged (see Production-limitation cross-ref #1).
01ECHO ADAPTATIONS (per the E3 / R3 precedent — how a v2-native input was reconstructed)
The locked script is an Echo-chain deliverable and does not carry v2 Fields 19/20/21/25. Mapping used:
v2 input the skill expects
Echo source used
Field 19 (dynamic + speaker + archetype)
Script "Speaker:" line + mini-brief Delivery row → 3.5 Newly-Diagnosed Peer Voice, solo/1p, D11 Green-Screen Reaction Stitch. Echo's D11 maps to v2 dynamic solo with a composited media co-star — NOT a 2p dynamic (the mini-brief is explicit: "1 performer + a composited second source. No second performer needed (unlike S4)."). Speaker file Known-incompatible rows (Solo × Studio / On-stage / TV-set / all 2p / panel) are all avoided by construction — see the anti-studio ruling below
Field 20 (setting/tone)
Mini-brief production demands ("medium close-up, clean background") re-read through review SOFT-6: the keyed background must be a UGC-native home plate (soft warm wall, shallow depth, home lighting), never studio seamless. Register is donor-inherited — protective-indignant peer, angry at the bottles, warm toward the viewer
Field 21 (editing style)
NOT declared in the Echo package — inherited from the donor card [R][W]: visual pops every 2–3s, bold high-contrast sans overlays, jump cuts to kill dead air, subtle driving beat + pop/whoosh SFX on graphic entries, constant pointing-at-media. Script DELIVERY NOTES add: no silence anywhere, audio bed under the whole run
Field 25 (production notes)
Script DELIVERY NOTES (MARKUP-ONLY tier) + the script's TRANSPOSITION PLAN "Production (donor parity, flagged)" block + review SOFT-6
Deterministic runtime block: donor band 61–83s; fulls A 79.6s · B 78.2s · C 78.2s word-derived; pause-adjusted A 81.2s · B/C 79.8s (all inside band)
Beat timecodes
Computed cumulative from per-beat word counts @182.5 wpm (3.0417 w/s), then rounded to INTEGER M:SS contiguous boundaries (each beat's end IS the next beat's start — no gaps, no decimals). Body timecodes use the Hook-A baseline (0:09); Hooks B and C run 8s, so their bodies shift −1s throughout
The anti-studio ruling (review SOFT-6, boarded not just noted).speakers_library/3_5_newly-diagnosed-peer.md lists Known incompatible: yapper Solo × Studio — "UGC peer doesn't fit studio polish." The concept's own spec words ("clean background, medium close-up, bold high-contrast overlays") could be read by production as studio polish — the one look this speaker is documented as unable to carry. Disposition: the green screen is a keying tool, not a look. She is keyed onto a warm home wall plate (her own room, shot separately or a plate photo), lit with practical/window-quality light, framed webcam-height at a slight downward-ish eye-level, with real skin and minimal makeup. High-contrast overlays stay (donor grammar, they live in the panel layer, not on her). Studio seamless, three-point beauty lighting, and any "presenter set" dressing are BANNED on this board.
Review-flag dispositions (ship order, gates delegated): copy is LOCKED — this storyboard changes zero words. ① SOFT-1 ("Take it for a month." pronoun): not a storyboard defect; boarded so the referent is visually unambiguous — the real Kindled bottle is in her hand and on screen continuously through the whole close, so "it" has a picture, not just an antecedent. ② SOFT-2 / SOFT-3 (hook lineage citations): dispositioned in the anchor list — 1018924643817868 restored as Hook B's measured video shape source, 1514909627007491 carried as Hook C's numbered-signs chassis (accurately labelled), and the static thebbco exemplar demoted to copy-layer with no visual borrow. Zero copy change. ③ SOFT-5 (Beat 6's limp hinge): mitigated storyboard-side — the panel-family switch and a hard jump cut land ON "Kindled keeps selling out," so the connective rides under a transition instead of sitting in a hold. Copy untouched. ④ SOFT-7b (hook heading said "~8s"): resolved — Hook A is boarded at its true 8.9s → 0:00–0:09; B and C at 7.6s → 0:00–0:08.
Hook-variant handling (Echo 1×3 contract): Beat 1 exists as THREE storyboard variants (1A / 1B / 1C) — interchangeable opening sections. Beats 2–8 are the shared locked-body storyboard. A and C land on the flip-the-bottle command; B lands on the back-label-math promise. All three exit on the IDENTICAL seam frame — performer-dominant state, panel cleared, real Kindled bottle already rising into her hand — so any variant cuts straight onto Beat 2's opening line ("Right here in my hand are Kindled liquid thyroid drops") with no re-introduction.
Delivery markup:[pause] ×1 (Reveal beat) and [beat] ×1 (Iron Tell) stripped from all on-screen text; carried into per-beat DIRECTION notes as tight holds. CAPS emphasis ("VERY different", "ANYTHING", "YOURSELF") is voice, never a burn. Pause note: 2 delivery tokens ≈ +1.6s (0.8s each) over word-derived runtime → delivered ≈ A 81.2s · B 79.8s · C 79.8s against the 83s band ceiling. Headroom: A 1.8s · B 3.2s · C 3.2s. All three inside the band on the delivered basis. Editors must NOT pad, must keep both holds tight (≤0.8s), and must add NO third pause — variant A owns the only tight margin, and per the no-word-shaving rule nothing is trimmed elsewhere to chase it.
Eight-beat discipline (donor budget preserved): 8/8 donor beat order, including the deliberate UMS-before-UMPb inversion (the fix is sold at beat 3, the villain is named at beat 5). No beat added, dropped or re-ordered. Heaviest beats = Offer 13.2s (18.6% word-share vs donor's 18.5% duration-share, Δ+0.1pp) and Four Jobs 11.2s — the donor's own two heaviest slots.
02COMPOSITE LAYER — the D11 stitch contract (NEW FORMAT for this account, read this first)
This account has never shipped a green-screen reaction stitch. There is no in-house precedent to copy, so the composite is specified explicitly and every beat below declares what is in the stitch panel vs. what is on the performer plate. The donor's grammar is unambiguous on one point: the composited panel is the co-star, not decoration. If the panel is passive, the format is not being executed.
The two layers
Layer
What it is
Who owns it
PERFORMER PLATE
The keyed performer over a warm UGC home-wall backdrop. One human, one wardrobe, one room, whole board.
Shoot
STITCH PANEL
The composited media source she points at, accuses and audits: retail listings, supplement-facts crops, an Rx bottle, own-site frames. Changes content every 2–3s.
Post (assets captured separately)
The three composite states (the editor's whole vocabulary)
State
Geometry (9:16)
Used for
P1 — PANEL-DOMINANT
Stitch panel is a full-bleed plate filling the top ~62%; performer keyed bottom-left, head-to-mid-chest, ~36% of frame height, her pointing arm rising across the seam into the panel.
The accusation and the arithmetic — beats 1A, 1B, 3, 4, 5
P2 — BALANCED
Panel top ~48% / performer bottom ~52% at MCU. Panel content is supporting, she is leading.
Beats 1C, 2 (mid), 6
P3 — PERFORMER-DOMINANT
Performer full-frame MCU over the home-wall plate; panel absent or reduced to a ≤25%-width corner card.
The seam frame, Beat 2's open, and the whole back half — beats 7, 8
Panel-content families (and the arc they trace)
The panel is not a grab-bag; it moves through four declared families, and the movement IS the argument:
STAGED-STILL — our own staged photo (a half-used dropper bottle on a nightstand). Beat 1C only.
FORENSIC-PANEL — supplement-facts macro crops, ours and theirs. Beats 2, 3, 4, 5 — the spine.
COMMERCE — our own site frames (restock banner, cart). Beat 6 only, and flagged as the board's single family switch.
NONE — the panel drops out entirely at beat 7 and never returns. This is the board's payoff move: the audit leaves the screen and enters her actual hands. Beats 7, 8.
Hard composite rules
She looks at the LENS, not at the panel. Donor grammar is direct eye contact while pointing. She points with peripheral confidence, like someone gesturing at a whiteboard she already knows by heart. An eyeline that drifts to the panel kills the accusation.
Shoot WIDE, crop in post. Frame full-torso with both hands free of the edges at all times, so post can crop to P1 / P2 / P3 without amputating the pointing hand. A cropped-off pointing arm is the format's #1 failure mode.
The pointing arm must cross the seam. Her hand enters the panel zone. If the arm stops at the boundary, the two layers read as unrelated windows instead of one stitched space.
Anonymity: every competitor artifact in the panel is brand-anonymized (wordmark blurred, cropped, or turned). The panel and the arithmetic are the shot, never the brand. Kindled artifacts are the only branded ones on the board.
No invented numbers ever appear in the panel — no stock counts, no review counts, no price claims (1B's prices are blurred by script direction). product_facts.md §6: offer/channel specifics are session-provided, never invented.
A visual pop every 2–3s (panel content change, stamp, circle, or crop push) with a pop/whoosh SFX per entry, over a subtle driving bed. No silence anywhere — donor parity.
Only ONE physical product exists in the room: the real Kindled bottle in her real hand. Every competing object lives in the panel and is never handled.
Asset pack the panel needs (capture pass, before the shoot edit)
Anonymized 3-up listing set (hook A) · 6-tile listing grid (hook B) · staged nightstand-bottle still (hook C) · look-alike bottle cutouts, fronts (beat 2) · Kindled supplement-facts macro (beats 2, 3, 4, 7) · 2 competitor supplement-facts macros, one iodine/tyrosine-thin, one with iron on the panel (beats 2, 4, 5) · generic amber Rx pill bottle, label anonymized (beat 5) · own-site restock banner + add-to-cart + multi-bottle cart line (beat 6) · 30-day guarantee badge (beat 8).
03Comp library inspiration anchors
Rotation: N/A this run — the donor is PINNED per the run order (SEED, binding; no rotation re-query executed, per the task directive). Supporting anchors are the concept's own CITED formula/exemplar rows plus the set's second measured D11 — declared choices per §2f (deliberate re-use is the operator's right; rotation never blocks a declared choice). Log append SKIPPED (echo run — handled at package). Pool note: no fresh §2b/§2c query ran. Same working resolution as the E3 and R3 findings — a SEED board inherits its anchor set from the pinned donor + the mini-brief's citations, and only re-queries when a beat type is left uncovered. Nothing is uncovered here: the donor is itself a D11 and supplies grammar for every beat. Within-session/cross-session diversity: zero overlap with the pilot-1 or Run-2 anchor sets (this is the first all-lymphoria D11 anchor set in the chain).
[Anchor A — CORNERSTONE] 1492572615705936 — lymphoria — winner_score 63.11 — video (THE DONOR, SEED — pinned CORNERSTONE) Hook pattern: H05 Remedy Firing Squad — serial triple negation over composited listings ("This is fake, this is fake, and this is definitely fake"), three public accusations inside four seconds, qualification riding on the category noun in the warning sentence; a permanent bold warning overlay from frame zero On-screen text style: bold high-contrast sans-serif burns, phrase-level verdicts stamped on the panel ("2026 SCAM" grammar), never a continuous caption track B-roll cuing: there is no B-roll — there is a PANEL. Composited retail listings, screenshots and product images pop every 2–3s beside/over the keyed creator; the pointing-at-media is load-bearing, not decorative Transition style: jump cut on nearly every sentence, zero dead air; panel content swaps carry the rhythm Mute-test asset: permanent warning overlay + pointing + the composited listings — donor report: passes "with flying colors"
Best-fit beat type in our script: ALL (SEED full-pattern borrow); primary: hook accusation grammar (1A), reveal/contrast bottle-flip (Beat 2), countable-mechanism panel teach (Beat 3), arithmetic disqualification (Beat 4), villain-after-fix (Beat 5), verification move (Beat 7), guarantee close (Beat 8)
Tooling stack inferred: 1 real performer on green screen + a composited second source + post graphics — maps 1:1 to our real-shoot target. No adaptation strain: this is the donor whose production we are literally reproducing
[Anchor B] 1018924643817868 — lymphoria — winner_score 45.66 — video (HOOK-B SHAPE source — restored per review SOFT-2) Hook pattern: the transparency-stunt open — a candor-plus-arithmetic admission that meets the buying objection head-on instead of promising ("I'm going to do something that's probably going to cost us our entire stock"): a transactional move disguised as a confession On-screen text style: offer/number-forward burns B-roll cuing: 3D animation + sourcing/lab footage — not imported
Best-fit beat type in our script: Hook 1B ONLY (the candor-open shape). FLAG: its D03 staged podcast/studio set-piece format is REJECTED wholesale — it is the most set-dependent donor in the set, and a studio apparatus is the exact look speaker 3.5 is documented as unable to carry. Borrowed at FORMULA level only, re-staged as the same green-screen composite as every other beat (VS6 cross-adaptation logged)
Tooling stack inferred: staged studio + broadcast mic — rejected; our restaging is the keyed plate + panel
[Anchor C] 1514909627007491 — lymphoria — winner_score 52.00 — video (HOOK-C CHASSIS source, accurately labelled per review SOFT-3) Hook pattern: the 5s numbered-signs open ("Three early signs… most people miss"). Review SOFT-3 verified this is third-person and routes to H07 by hook_seconds.md's own tie-break — our Hook C converts it to true H01 by going second-person ("your thyroid supplement… you're still tired"). Carried here as the chassis, not as an H01 exemplar On-screen text style: enumerated sign-list burns, item-by-item reveal — this is the transferable part B-roll cuing: costumed-authority talking head with symptom cutaways
Best-fit beat type in our script: Hook 1C ONLY (the item-by-item checklist OST grammar). FLAG: its D01 Costumed Authority format is REJECTED — a credentialed register kills this concept (the mini-brief is explicit: "the warning does the authority work, the voice shouldn't"). Borrowed at OST-ENUMERATION level only (VS6 cross-adaptation logged)
Tooling stack inferred: costumed authority talking head — rejected
[Anchor D] 2684523008388969 — thebbco — winner_score 98 — STATIC/image (COPY-LAYER ONLY — demoted per §2c + review SOFT-2's media verification) ANG_THYROID_METABOLISM_07 Radical Transparency & Objection Demolition exemplar — brutal candor that meets the objection with hard math instead of a promise. Verified "media": "image" in mined/steal/assignments.jsonl and absent from video_corpus.jsonl — it cannot evidence a video hook's visual shape.
Best-fit beat type in our script: Hook 1B copy/candor register only — NO visual borrow (its single hero frame has no per-beat shot pattern to transfer)
Tooling stack inferred: n/a (static)
[Anchor E] 4114239875533382 — lymphoria — winner_score 49.42 — video (D11 GEOMETRY reference only) The set's other D11 — strict 50/50 vertical split-screen, 9:16, speaking creator left / silent reactor right, top overlay label, product held to lens for physical intimacy. Included because it is the only second measured example of this delivery mode available to the editor, and geometry precedent is exactly what this board lacks.
Best-fit beat type in our script: composite GEOMETRY reference for the global spine (how a 9:16 stitch is divided and how a performer holds a product to lens inside one). FLAG: its 2-performer authority engine is explicitly NOT imported — S2 is 1 performer + a composited media source (mini-brief, binding). Its rigid 50/50 split is also not ours: our panel/performer ratio moves (P1/P2/P3) because our panel content is the argument, not a reactor. VS6 cross-adaptation logged at role level
Tooling stack inferred: green-screen split composite — the composite technique transfers, the second casting slot does not
04Per-beat storyboard
Global visual spine (applies to every beat unless overridden): 9:16 vertical. PERFORMER PLATE: speaker 3.5 archetype — woman 38–48, minimal makeup, real skin, casual knit or soft solid top in a warm earthy neutral (nothing green, nothing patterned — keying discipline), shot on green with ≥1.5m separation, soft even key + a light edge/hair separation so the key holds cleanly on her hands (they are the format's working tool). Framed FULL-TORSO at webcam height, eye-level to a hair below, direct to lens, handheld-feel micro-drift (never gimbal-smooth). Keyed in post over a warm UGC home-wall plate — soft neutral wall, shallow depth, one warm practical or window source, a hint of domestic texture. NO studio seamless, NO beauty lighting, NO presenter set (review SOFT-6). STITCH PANEL: composited media source per beat, content changing every 2–3s, entering with a pop/whoosh; bold high-contrast sans overlays live in the panel layer, not on her. CUTTING: jump cut on nearly every sentence; zero dead air; the only two holds on the board are the script's [pause] (Beat 2) and [beat] (Beat 5), both ≤0.8s. AUDIO: subtle driving bed under the entire run, pop/whoosh SFX on every graphic entry, no silence anywhere. OST: bold high-contrast sans, all caps for verdicts, sentence-case for the qualifier lines; sparing — the panel carries most of the information. PROP LAW: exactly ONE physical object in the room, the real Kindled bottle; everything competing lives in the panel and is never touched.
▸1H05 Remedy Firing Squad (the donor's own shape) [0:00–0:09] Beat 1A: HOOK A
Mute-test stop-scroll via three public accusations in the first four seconds
On-screen text
Permanent two-line warning card, top of frame, in at t=0 and never leaves the beat: line 1 "⚠️ DO NOT BUY THYROID DROPS" / line 2 "until you flip the bottle" — bold high-contrast sans
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: full-torso MCU on green, webcam height, direct to lens, handheld micro-drift
BLOCKING: three hard points up-right on the three verdicts (arm must clear frame edge — shoot wide);
palm-out stop gesture on the command line; end on clean MCU, bottle rising into hand
LIGHTING: soft even key + edge separation so the key holds on the hands; NO beauty light
WARDROBE: warm earthy knit, solid, nothing green
PROPS: Kindled bottle (enters only on the exit frame)
STITCH_PANEL (post): 3-up anonymized thyroid-drop listing cards, top plate, full beat;
red ✗ stamp on card 1 (t≈0.8s) + card 2 (t≈2.2s); amber ⚠️ stamp on card 3 (t≈4.0s)
PANEL_STATE: P1 panel-dominant (panel top ~62%, performer bottom-left ~36%)
POINTING: arm crosses the seam on every accusation — non-negotiable
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): permanent 2-line card "⚠️ DO NOT BUY THYROID DROPS" / "until you flip the bottle", t=0 to beat end
SFX: pop/whoosh on each stamp; driving bed from t=0
TRANSITION (editorial): hard jump cut, 4-frame panel clear, scale to P3 seam frame
DIRECTION NOTE: protective-indignant peer — angry at the bottles, warm toward the viewer.
Metronome-even triplet, punchy, no acceleration. 182.5 wpm, zero hesitation.
NEVER credentialed, never corporate: the warning does the authority work.
DURATION: 9s (27 words @182.5 wpm = 8.9s)
Production limitation
Listing-card legibility at phone size — build the cards at 2× and crop tight (image + a few words), never a full screenshot. Brand marks blurred/cropped in every card (anonymity rule). Stamps are post graphics, nothing burned in camera
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] full-pattern borrow — serial-negation-over-composited-listings, verdict-per-panel, permanent warning overlay, pointing-as-load-bearing (the donor's own hook, transposed accusation-for-accusation)
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P1 — PANEL-DOMINANT the whole beat
Stitch panel
FORENSIC-RETAIL — a 3-up grid of anonymized thyroid-drop retail listing cards (bottle image, star row, blurred price), tiled across the top plate from t=0. Verdict stamps land in sequence: red ✗ slams listing 1 on "This one won't work" (t≈0.8s) · red ✗ slams listing 2 on the second "won't work" (t≈2.2s) · amber ⚠️ slams listing 3 on "fighting your thyroid medication" (t≈4.0s). Each stamp = one visual pop + one SFX hit. The three cards HOLD, stamped, through the command line
Performer plate
Keyed bottom-left, MCU, stern, direct to lens the entire time, pointing hard up-and-right into each card as she condemns it — her arm crosses the seam on all three. On the command line she turns her hand palm-out (stop gesture) and holds the lens
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "turn the bottle around" — panel clears to black for 4 frames, performer scales to P3 seam frame with the Kindled bottle already rising into her hand
Mute-test
PASS — the permanent warning card is legible at t=0, three listing cards + two ✗ stamps + one ⚠️ land inside the first 4.5s, and the pointing arm is in continuous motion. The qualifier ("THYROID DROPS") is on screen from frame zero, which is what actually governs on muted autoplay — this is the mechanism by which Hook A's deferred spoken category noun is covered (review check 7 passed it on exactly this basis)
▸2Transparency-Stunt Open (candor + arithmetic) [0:00–0:08] Beat 1B: HOOK B
Qualification in literal line one
On-screen text
Card "THE BACK-LABEL MATH" — bold caps, top of frame — in at t≈1.5s, holds to beat end
Lighting
Plate default; panel at native capture brightness, the tally scribble in a high-contrast marker color
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: same MCU, same framing as 1A (seam-identical exit)
BLOCKING: broad sweep across the grid on "forty dollars"; single precise point into the crop on "the math"
STITCH_PANEL (post): 6-tile anonymized listing grid, PRICES BLURRED (t=0-4s) → crop push to
listing 1's supplement-facts panel (t≈4s) → hand-drawn "1 of 4?" tally scribbles on (t≈5.5s)
PANEL_STATE: P1 throughout
POINTING: sweep then point — the point must land inside the panel zone
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "THE BACK-LABEL MATH" card, t≈1.5s to beat end
SFX: whoosh on the crop push; marker-scratch on the tally
TRANSITION (editorial): hard jump cut to P3 seam frame
DIRECTION NOTE: candor register — she is showing you her working, not selling. Flat, fast, certain.
"forty dollars" is said as an ordinary fact, never as outrage.
DURATION: 8s (23 words @182.5 wpm = 7.6s)
Production limitation
Price blurring must be a genuine blur, not a black bar (a bar reads as redaction/censorship, which imports a scam frame we are not making). The tally is a post animation, not a physical marker on a screen
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor B] the transparency-stunt candor-open shape (VS6 cross-adaptation LOGGED: its D03 staged-studio apparatus REJECTED, re-staged on our keyed plate); [Anchor D] the radical-transparency candor register — copy-layer only, no visual borrow (static, §2c demotion); [Anchor A] panel geometry + pointing grammar
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P1 — PANEL-DOMINANT, with one crop push inside the panel
Stitch panel
FORENSIC-RETAIL → FORENSIC-PANEL. Opens on a 6-tile shopping grid of anonymized thyroid-drop listings, prices blurred (script direction — and the house rule: no price facts). At t≈4s the panel crop-pushes into the first listing's supplement-facts crop, and a hand-drawn tally scribbles on: "1 of 4?" — drawn on, marker-style, in one stroke as she says "the math"
Performer plate
Keyed bottom-left, MCU, direct to lens; she gestures broadly across the grid on "forty dollars," then a single precise point into the panel crop on "the math nobody puts on the front of the bottle"
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "the front of the bottle" — panel clears, P3 seam frame (bottle rising into hand)
Mute-test
PASS — the shopping grid is instantly readable as "the bottles you are comparing," the "THE BACK-LABEL MATH" card lands at 1.5s and holds, and the "1 of 4?" tally is a complete sound-off argument by t≈5.5s (VS5: asset chain continuous through the full 5s window)
Second-person symptom self-selection before the purchase frame arrives
On-screen text
Card "3 SIGNS your thyroid supplement isn't working" — bold, top of frame — in at t=0.4s, holds through the checklist
Lighting
Plate default; staged still at warm lamp brightness (the still should feel like a real 11pm phone photo, not a product shot)
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: MCU, keyed bottom-right this variant, direct to lens
BLOCKING: three fingers counted up on the three signs (hand held high, clear of the frame edge);
wrist-turn bottle mime on "turn it around" — motion-matches Beat 2's real bottle lift
STITCH_PANEL (post): staged still — half-used dropper bottle on a nightstand, warm lamp;
checklist stamps TIRED ☑ (t≈2.0s), COLD ☑ (t≈2.9s), GAINING ☑ (t≈3.8s)
PANEL_STATE: P2 balanced
POINTING: n/a this beat — the finger-count IS the gesture; hand stays on her side of the seam
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "3 SIGNS your thyroid supplement isn't working" card, t=0.4s to beat end
SFX: soft tick per checklist stamp; driving bed from t=0
TRANSITION (editorial): motion-matched jump cut on the mime-flip
DIRECTION NOTE: the softest of the three doors — recognition, not accusation. She is describing
her own last bottle. The colon in the script line is page punctuation: read it as a
full stop (SOFT-4), identical audio, no copy change.
DURATION: 8s (23 words @182.5 wpm = 7.6s)
Production limitation
None. The staged still is the lightest asset on the board — shoot it on the same phone, same home, before the green-screen day
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor C] item-by-item enumerated sign-list OST grammar (VS6 cross-adaptation LOGGED: its D01 costumed-authority format REJECTED, and per review SOFT-3 it is carried as the numbered-signs chassis our hook converts to true H01 by going second-person); [Anchor A] composite geometry
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P2 — BALANCED (she leads; the panel supports — the one hook where she is the argument)
Stitch panel
STAGED-STILL — a composited photo of a half-used dropper bottle on a nightstand (our own staged still, unbranded/anonymous bottle, warm lamp light, real-home texture). Three checklist stamps land over it item-by-item, one per named sign: TIRED ☑ (t≈2.0s) · COLD ☑ (t≈2.9s) · GAINING ☑ (t≈3.8s)
Performer plate
Keyed bottom-right at MCU, direct to lens, counting the three on her fingers as she names them (the mute-test motion), then miming the bottle flip — a clean, unmistakable wrist turn — on the handoff line
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "turn it around" — the mime-flip motion-matches straight into Beat 2's real bottle rising into her hand (the cleanest of the three seams)
Mute-test
PASS — the "3 SIGNS" card is up at 0.4s, three checklist stamps land inside 4s, and the finger-count reads as an enumeration sound-off. Prop-plus-card chain covers the full 5s window (VS5 ✓)
▸4Beat 2: THE REVEAL & CONTRAST [0:09–0:19]
Product in hand at 2.8% word-depth
On-screen text
Card "SAME FRONT. DIFFERENT BACK." — bold caps — stamps in on the panel flip (t≈7.3s), holds through the pause to beat end
Lighting
Plate default; the two panel crops lit flat and even (legibility beats mood on every FORENSIC-PANEL frame)
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: P3 full-frame MCU open → scale to P2 → P1 corner as panel takes over
BLOCKING: real bottle raised to lens at t=0 (label toward camera, held casually, not presented);
gesture between the incoming cutouts; PHYSICALLY TURN THE BOTTLE IN HAND on "back panels?" —
her real flip is the cue for the panel flip (the two motions must match frame-for-frame)
PROPS: the real Kindled bottle (the board's ONLY physical prop, enters here, never leaves)
STITCH_PANEL (post): NONE (t=0-2.5s) → 2 look-alike bottle cutouts slide in, fronts to lens (t≈2.5s)
→ all three FLIP, resolve to 2 supplement-facts crops side by side, Kindled L / competitor R (t≈7s)
PANEL_STATE: P3 → P2 → P1
POINTING: open-hand presentation, not accusation, this beat — the register softens to conspiratorial candor
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "SAME FRONT. DIFFERENT BACK." card, t≈7.3s to beat end
SFX: pop per cutout; a single flip whoosh on the three-way turn
TRANSITION (editorial): [pause] = dead-still ≤0.8s hold on the flipped panels, then hard cut on "VERY different."
DIRECTION NOTE: conspiratorial candor — she is letting you in on something. "VERY different" carries
CAPS emphasis in VOICE only (pitch, not volume); it is never burned as text.
DURATION: 10s (30 words @182.5 wpm = 9.9s + the [pause])
Production limitation
The flip match is the beat's quality gate — shoot several takes of her turning the bottle at different speeds so post can pick the one that lands on the panel-flip frame. Kindled label legibility at MCU: brace or use a second macro insert as fallback (front label only; the back-panel legibility job belongs to the composited macro, not to the live bottle)
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's own reveal/contrast beat borrowed at the same structural turn and the same 8.3% budget, including its verbatim-portable language pattern rendered as picture ("official vs. fake" → "front panel vs. back panel"); [Anchor E] product-held-to-lens-inside-a-composite geometry
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P3 → P2 → P1 — the board's one three-state beat, and the reason the state vocabulary exists
Stitch panel
• t=0–2.5s: NONE. Panel is empty. She is alone with the real bottle (P3) — this is the only moment the viewer gets her undivided • t≈2.5s (on "every bottle you're comparing"): two look-alike bottle cutouts slide in from frame right into the panel zone, fronts facing lens, flanking her raised bottle — fronts near-identical to hers by design (P2). One pop each • t≈7s (on "But the back panels?"): all three FLIP in place, and the panel resolves to two supplement-facts crops side by side — Kindled left, competitor right, both legible (P1) • [pause] = TIGHT ≤0.8s hold on the two flipped panels, dead still, before "VERY different." lands on a hard cut back
Performer plate
Opens P3 full-frame — she raises the real Kindled bottle to the lens, label toward camera, casually (a find, not a pitch). As the cutouts arrive she scales down and gestures between them. On "back panels?" she physically turns her own bottle around in her hand — her real flip cues the panel's flip
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "VERY different." straight into the Kindled panel going near-full-frame for Beat 3
Mute-test
N/A (non-hook beat; the flip + the two side-by-side panels + the "SAME FRONT. DIFFERENT BACK." card carry full sound-off comprehension)
▸5UMS INTRO [0:19–0:30] — the fix before the villain (donor's deliberate inversion) Beat 3: THE FOUR JOBS
The countable mechanism, taught on a real label
On-screen text
The counter stamps only (1 · 2 · 3 · 4 → 4 OF 4). No verdict card this beat — the label is doing the talking, and the beat needs to feel like reading, not like being sold
Lighting
Panel flat and even (label legibility is the whole beat); plate default
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: corner bug lower-left (~28% height) — shoot the SAME wide MCU take, crop in post
BLOCKING: hand rises and lands on each named line as it is circled — four touches, evenly spaced
STITCH_PANEL (post): Kindled supplement-facts macro, near-full-frame; highlighter circles draw on
IODINE (t≈1.0s) / SELENIUM (t≈3.0s) / ZINC (t≈6.5s) / COPPER (t≈9.0s), ACCUMULATING;
corner counter 1→2→3→4, holds "4 OF 4"
PANEL_STATE: P1 (maximum panel)
POINTING: four seam-crossing touches — this is the beat where the pointing must be most precise
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): counter stamps only
SFX: pop per circle; counter tick per increment
TRANSITION (editorial): jump cut; the four-circled panel SLIDES LEFT into Beat 4 (circles persist)
DIRECTION NOTE: downshift half a step — teach cadence, one job per breath. She assumes the viewer
reads panels (she does — VOC: "Get TSH done again, FT4, FT3, iron panel incl. ferritin").
T4/T3 runs UNGLOSSED. Generous, not lecturing.
DURATION: 11s (34 words @182.5 wpm = 11.2s)
Production limitation
Supplement-facts type legibility is this beat's hard gate. Shoot the Kindled panel as a proper flat macro (braced phone or a copy-stand pass), evenly lit, no glare, at maximum resolution — the circles are worthless if the words under them can't be read on a phone. Fallback if the type is still too small at 9:16: rebuild the panel as a clean typeset recreation of the real label at larger scale (label-true, no wording change), flagged to the editor
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's UMS-intro beat borrowed at the same structural turn, same 16.7% budget, same countable-N rhythm — with the donor's four-herbs/four-layers swapped for four cofactors/four jobs per the transposition plan; the accumulating-circle device is the donor's "with {brand} you're getting all N" logic made visual
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P1 — PANEL-DOMINANT at its most extreme (panel near-full-frame; she reduces to a corner bug, ~28% height, lower-left)
Stitch panel
FORENSIC-PANEL — the Kindled supplement-facts macro goes near-full-frame. A highlighter circle draws on around each named line, in rhythm with the spoken line: IODINE (t≈1.0s) → SELENIUM (t≈3.0s) → ZINC (t≈6.5s) → COPPER (t≈9.0s). Circles ACCUMULATE — all four are on screen at beat end. A corner counter ticks 1 → 2 → 3 → 4 on each circle and holds 4 OF 4
Performer plate
Corner bug, lower-left. She is small but still pointing — her hand rises into the panel and lands on each line as it is circled. Register downshifts to teach cadence, one job per breath
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "keeps zinc in balance" — the four-circled Kindled panel slides left and holds as the left half of Beat 4's two-up (continuity: the same circles stay on it)
Mute-test
N/A (the accumulating circles + the 1→4 counter are a complete sound-off argument)
▸6Beat 4: COMPETITOR DISQUALIFICATION [0:30–0:40]
The flat, unhedged verdict on the entire competing category
On-screen text
Card "1 OF 4 JOBS." — bold caps — stamps onto the competitor half at t≈5.5s (against Beat 3's held "4 OF 4" reading, which the viewer just watched accumulate). Holds to beat end
Lighting
Both panel crops lit identically flat — any lighting asymmetry would read as rigging the comparison
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: corner bug lower-left, continuous from Beat 3
BLOCKING: point left (ours) then right (theirs) on the comparison; hand drops flat on "ANYTHING"
STITCH_PANEL (post): two-up. LEFT = Kindled panel, 4 circles intact (continuity from Beat 3).
RIGHT = competitor supplement-facts crop, one yellow highlight, red strike-through drawing
across the rest on "That's it." (t≈4.5s)
PANEL_STATE: P1, split two-up
POINTING: one seam-crossing point per side
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "1 OF 4 JOBS." card stamps on the competitor half, t≈5.5s to beat end
SFX: strike-scratch on the red stroke; hard stamp hit on the card
TRANSITION (editorial): hard jump cut; two-up collapses to the competitor crop alone
DIRECTION NOTE: flat, unhedged verdict register — this is a voltage-floor evidence line, do NOT
soften it into a caution. "ANYTHING" carries CAPS emphasis in VOICE only. No sneer:
she is stating arithmetic, and the arithmetic is what's brutal.
DURATION: 10s (31 words @182.5 wpm = 10.2s)
Production limitation
Competitor-panel anonymity — the crop must show the facts box only, brand marks out of frame or blurred. Capture at least two different competitor panels (one thin, one with iron) so Beats 4 and 5 aren't visibly the same bottle, which would narrow a category verdict into a single-brand attack
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's disqualification beat borrowed at the same structural turn and same 8.3% budget, including its flat "It's not going to do anything" verdict register (diluted-extracts accusation → missing-cofactor count per the transposition plan)
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P1 — PANEL-DOMINANT, panel internally split into a two-up
Stitch panel
FORENSIC-PANEL two-up. Left: the Kindled panel from Beat 3, all four circles intact (continuity — the audience already watched them get drawn). Right: a competitor supplement-facts crop with one lonely yellow highlight (iodine, and maybe tyrosine) and the rest of the facts box struck through in red on "That's it." The strike-through draws on as a single fast stroke
Performer plate
Corner bug, lower-left, holding from Beat 3. She points left then right — the comparison gesture — then drops her hand flat on the verdict
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "ANYTHING" — the two-up collapses, competitor crop survives alone and begins Beat 5's scroll
Mute-test
N/A (the four-circles-vs-one-highlight two-up plus "1 OF 4 JOBS." is arguably the board's single most legible sound-off frame)
▸7UMPb [0:40–0:51] — the villain, after the fix (the indignation peak) Beat 5: THE IRON TELL
Voltage evidence line #3
On-screen text
Card "IRON + LEVOTHYROXINE ✗" — bold caps — stamps on the split at t≈5.8s, holds to beat end
Lighting
Panel flat; the red circle and arrow are the only saturated color on the board so far — hold that exclusivity, they are the visual peak
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: corner bug through the scroll → scale UP to ~40% on the prescription accusation
BLOCKING: still through the [beat] hold (she waits with the viewer); point at the red circle on
"Iron."; point at the Rx bottle on "working against your prescription"
STITCH_PANEL (post): competitor crop scrolls down slowly (t=0-2.5s, the audit motion) → HARD STOP
with IRON centered + red circle slam (t≈2.8s) → panel splits: iron crop L / anonymized amber
Rx bottle R + red interference arrow pulsing between (t≈5.5s)
CORNER SLOT — variant A: the ⚠️-stamped Hook-A listing returns (callback payoff).
variants B/C: a plain third listing card, NO ⚠️, no callback. DO NOT cross-cut these.
PANEL_STATE: P1 throughout, performer scales up mid-beat
POINTING: two seam-crossing points, both hard
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "IRON + LEVOTHYROXINE ✗" card, t≈5.8s to beat end
SFX: soft scroll rumble; HEAVY hit on the red circle slam (biggest hit on the board); pulse on the arrow
TRANSITION (editorial): hard jump cut, panel wipes to COMMERCE family
DIRECTION NOTE: the indignation peak — re-accelerate through this beat. [beat] after "the one nobody
checks" is a TIGHT ≤0.8s hold, then "Iron." lands as a single hard word on the circle slam.
Present tense, unhedged: "IS working against your prescription" (the hard verb shipped at write —
never let a take drift back to "can work against").
DURATION: 11s (33 words @182.5 wpm = 10.8s + the [beat])
Production limitation
The Rx bottle must be a generic amber prescription bottle with the label anonymized or blank — no real patient label, no real drug name on screen. The interference arrow is a post graphic. Iron must be genuinely present on the competitor panel used here (capture a real one — do not composite the word onto a panel that doesn't carry it). Kindled contains no iron (product_facts.md §3.4) — staging must never imply the circled panel is ours
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's UMPb slot borrowed at the same structural turn, same 13.9% budget, same villain-AFTER-fix inversion, and the same plain-accusation register (channel accusation → medication-interference accusation per the transposition plan); the scroll-then-circle audit motion is the donor's pointing-at-media grammar extended into a single continuous move
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P1 — PANEL-DOMINANT, with the board's one scrolling panel move
Stitch panel
FORENSIC-PANEL, three moves: • t=0–2.5s: the competitor crop from Beat 4 scrolls slowly downward — the audit motion, the panel physically being read. The [beat] hold sits here, mid-scroll, ≤0.8s, dead still • t≈2.8s: the scroll STOPS hard with IRON centered, and a red circle slams onto it on the spoken word "Iron." One heavy SFX hit — the biggest single graphic hit on the board • t≈5.5s: the panel splits — iron-circled crop left, a generic amber Rx pill bottle (label anonymized) right, with a red interference arrow animating between them, pulsing on "every single morning" • Variant-conditional callback (READ THIS): on variant A only, the ⚠️-stamped listing card from Hook A returns as a small corner thumbnail at t≈0.5s — the third accusation getting paid off, which is a real structural payoff in that cut. On variants B and C that thumbnail is meaningless (those hooks never showed it) — in B/C the corner slot carries a plain third competitor listing card instead, no ⚠️, no callback read. Do not ship the A thumbnail on the B/C cuts
Performer plate
Corner bug through the scroll, then scales up to P1-large (~40%) on "that bottle is working against your prescription" — she gets bigger exactly where the accusation is most direct. Points at the red circle, then at the Rx bottle
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "leaves iron out on purpose" — panel wipes to the COMMERCE family (the board's one content-family switch, see Beat 6)
Mute-test
N/A (the scroll-stop-circle sequence plus the Rx interference arrow plus the card is a complete sound-off accusation)
▸8Beat 6: DEMAND-DRIVEN SCARCITY [0:51–1:00]
Scarcity as evidence of demand, never of supply weakness
On-screen text
Card "IT KEEPS SELLING OUT." — bold caps — stamps in on the second panel pop (t≈4s), holds to beat end
Lighting
Plate default; site frames at native brightness
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: back up to P2 MCU, warmer, open posture
BLOCKING: light open-hand gestures only — NO pointing this beat (the accusation register is over)
STITCH_PANEL (post): COMMERCE montage, ~2s each: "Back in stock" banner → add-to-cart tap →
multi-bottle cart line. ALL our own site. ZERO numbers on screen.
PANEL_STATE: P2 balanced
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "IT KEEPS SELLING OUT." card, t≈4s to beat end
SFX: pop per panel change; a soft cart-tick on the add-to-cart
TRANSITION (editorial): hard jump cut; PANEL DROPS OUT PERMANENTLY
DIRECTION NOTE: confident warmth from here to the close — sure, not rushed. SOFT-5 mitigation:
the hinge line ("One more thing worth knowing") is LOCKED copy, so it must not sit in a
hold — land the family switch and a hard cut ON "Kindled keeps selling out," so the
connective rides UNDER a transition instead of announcing a digression.
DURATION: 9s (28 words @182.5 wpm = 9.2s)
Production limitation
Every frame here must be our own site — no third-party marketplace UI (that would assert a channel fact the brand files do not carry; product_facts.md §6, and the mini-brief's ⚐ beat-6 flag). Capture at native retina scale and crop; never screenshot at phone size and upscale
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's beat-6 scarcity slot at the same 15.3% budget — with its channel-exclusivity fact deliberately NOT imported (the resolved swap declared in the script's transposition plan: house-default demand-driven scarcity, MT_03 crowd-demand-brag register). The panel-family switch mirrors the donor's own beat-6 pivot from competitor listings to its own channel content
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P2 — BALANCED (warmth returns; she comes back up to size after four beats of being a bug)
Stitch panel
COMMERCE — the board's ONE content-family switch, declared. Rapid montage, ~2s per pop, all captures of our own site: (1) a "Back in stock" banner, (2) an add-to-cart tap, (3) a multi-bottle cart line. No stock counts. No review counts. No prices. No numbers of any kind — motion does the demand talking (script direction, and product_facts.md §6)
Performer plate
Scales back up to P2 MCU, warmer, more open posture. Light gestures toward the panel, no hard points — the accusation register is over
Transition out
Hard jump cut on "stocking up" — panel drops out completely and does not return (see Beat 7)
Mute-test
N/A (restock banner + cart motion + the card carry the demand read sound-off)
▸9the title move, the board's mute-test anchor Beat 7: VERIFICATION CTA [1:00–1:06]
Micro-commitment before the offer
On-screen text
The four numeral stamps only. No card, no verdict — the instruction is the whole message and it is being physically demonstrated
Lighting
Plate default; add a touch of practical bounce onto the bottle's back panel so the label reads on the live flip
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: P3 full-frame MCU, home-wall plate, direct to lens
BLOCKING: one clean unhurried flip of the REAL bottle, front to back; hold the back panel to lens
through the counting stamps; do not withdraw it — it stays up into Beat 8
PROPS: the real Kindled bottle (same bottle, same label state, since Beat 2)
STITCH_PANEL (post): NONE. Zero panel. This is a hard instruction, not an omission.
PANEL_STATE: P3
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): numeral stamps 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 over the LIVE bottle's back panel,
t≈3.2 / 3.8 / 4.4 / 5.0s — each landing on a real line of the real label
SFX: soft tick per numeral; the bed thins here (the only place it breathes)
TRANSITION (editorial): NO CUT — continuous into Beat 8
DIRECTION NOTE: she hands it over and steps back. "YOURSELF" carries CAPS emphasis in VOICE only.
No urgency, no push — the confidence of someone who knows the viewer will check.
DURATION: 6s (19 words @182.5 wpm = 6.2s)
Production limitation
The live back-panel flip must be legible enough that the numeral stamps look like they are landing on real lines. Shoot several flips at different distances; if the live label cannot hold legibility at 9:16, the fallback is to push in tighter on the bottle (still live, still her hands) rather than to cut to a composited crop — cutting to a crop here would destroy the beat's entire point
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's verification-CTA beat borrowed at the same structural turn and same 11.1% budget, including its exact "don't take my word for it" micro-commitment move (URL-check verification → panel-count verification, per the mini-brief's beat-7 contract). The panel drop-out is original direction (VS3 rationale logged): it is calibrated to the persuasion goal — a verification instruction is only credible if the demonstrator stops using the tool she has been accusing everyone else with
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P3 — PERFORMER-DOMINANT. The stitch panel is GONE.
Stitch panel
NONE — deliberate, and the payoff of the entire composite grammar. For six beats the argument has lived on a screen beside her. Here it leaves the screen and enters her actual hands: she is full-frame in her real room, holding a real bottle. This absence is the beat. Do not put anything in the panel zone. Do not add a "helpful" reference crop
Performer plate
Full-frame MCU. She physically flips the real Kindled bottle to camera — front to back, one clean unhurried turn — and holds the back panel toward lens. Counting stamps land directly over her live bottle's back panel, not over a composited crop: 1 (t≈3.2s) · 2 (t≈3.8s) · 3 (t≈4.4s) · 4 (t≈5.0s)
Transition out
No cut — she keeps the bottle up and carries it straight into Beat 8 (continuous framing; the close begins with the same object already in frame). This is the only beat-to-beat handoff on the board with no jump cut, and that stillness is what makes the close land as confidence
Mute-test
N/A as a hook beat — but this is the board's strongest sound-off frame and should be treated as the thumbnail/still candidate: a real woman turning a real bottle around while four numbers count off on its label needs no audio and no context
The guarantee stated whole and first, then a dare with a named stake, then the stock-check CTA
On-screen text
Three stamps, staged as the beat's shape: • "30-DAY MONEY-BACK GUARANTEE" badge — composites in on the spoken guarantee at t≈2.5s, holds ~4s (native-simple: a clean type badge, no seal, no ribbon, no laurel — ornament reads as fine print, which is the exact thing the copy disowns) • "STILL TIRED?" stamps at t≈6.5s, "STILL COLD?" at t≈7.2s — the two named stakes given their own visual beat. This is the v1.1 fix made visible, and it is why the close reads as a dare rather than a term sheet • "EVERY DOLLAR BACK." stamps at t≈8.2s, holds to end frame
Lighting
Plate default, warming a half-stop into the end frame
▸ Prompt
PRIMARY_LAYER: real-shoot (green-screen key, UGC-native)
PLATE: P3 full-frame MCU, continuous from Beat 7 (no cut into this beat)
BLOCKING: lower the bottle to chest on the guarantee; hold level through the dare; settle on the
final line; end frame = bottle at chest, badge beside it, ~1.2s hold
PROPS: the real Kindled bottle (unbroken continuity from Beat 2)
STITCH_PANEL (post): NONE — and no PDP frame, no button, no arrow, no link chrome anywhere
PANEL_STATE: P3
ON_SCREEN_TEXT (post): "30-DAY MONEY-BACK GUARANTEE" badge t≈2.5s (~4s hold, NO seal/ribbon) →
"STILL TIRED?" t≈6.5s → "STILL COLD?" t≈7.2s → "EVERY DOLLAR BACK." t≈8.2s to end frame
SFX: soft stamp on the badge; two light hits on the stakes; a final settled hit on "EVERY DOLLAR BACK.";
the bed resolves out under the end frame
TRANSITION (editorial): 1.2s end-frame hold, cut to black
DIRECTION NOTE: land steady and certain — sure, not rushed. Say the guarantee WHOLE ("a thirty-day
money-back guarantee") and never clip it to a bare "thirty days" (it would read as a supply
claim). "still tired" and "still cold" are the dare's stake: hit them FLAT and certain,
never pitying. "That's confidence, not fine print." is inherited register, not filler —
deliver it as a shrug, not a slogan. "Go see if it's in stock." — stock-check register,
urgency without volume, NO link language, ever.
DURATION: 14s (40 words @182.5 wpm = 13.2s)
Production limitation
The guarantee badge is the board's only non-stamp graphic — keep it native-simple. Label-truth staging (product_facts.md §6): the badge says exactly "30-DAY MONEY-BACK GUARANTEE" and nothing else; no percentage, no bundle, no price, no stock number appears anywhere on screen. The badge lands after the guarantee is spoken whole, so the on-screen "30-DAY" cannot be read ahead of the audio as a supply window (the E3 v1.3 lesson, carried)
Comp library inspiration
[Anchor A] the donor's offer/risk-reversal beat borrowed at the same structural turn and same 16.7% budget, including its guarantee-forward close structure and third-party "they"-voice for the brand — with its B2G1 / 10,000-reviews / 60-day facts explicitly NOT imported (none exist for Kindled; transposition plan, §6). The two named-stake stamps are original direction (VS3 rationale logged): the v1.1 copy fix's entire value is that the refund condition names a checkable state, and a close whose copy names the stake while the visual doesn't is a half-executed fix
▸ Reviewer notes
Composite state
P3 — PERFORMER-DOMINANT, panel still absent, holding continuously from Beat 7
Stitch panel
NONE. The panel does not return. The close is her, the bottle, and the badge. No PDP frame, no button graphic, no arrow, no link chrome of any kind (house rule: no link/tap language, and no visual equivalent of it either)
Performer plate
Full-frame MCU, bottle still in hand from Beat 7. She lowers it to chest height on the guarantee sentence, holds level through the dare, and settles on the final line. Minimal movement — the ease is the argument
Transition out
END FRAME — she holds, bottle at chest, guarantee badge re-stamped beside it, ~1.2s hold, cut to black. No end card, no URL burn, no logo animation
Mute-test
N/A (the badge + the two named stakes + "EVERY DOLLAR BACK." carry the whole risk reversal sound-off, and the bottle is on screen throughout)
05Composite-layer beat map (the editor's one-page reference)
FORENSIC-PANEL — competitor crop SCROLLS → stops on IRON + red circle → splits with anonymized Rx bottle + interference arrow. Corner slot is variant-conditional
Bug → scales up to ~40% on the accusation
Two-up collapses to one crop
6
P2
COMMERCE (the one family switch) — restock banner / add-to-cart / multi-bottle cart. Zero numbers
Back up to MCU, open gestures, no pointing
Hard wipe to the new family
7
P3
NONE — deliberate. The audit leaves the screen and enters her hands
Full-frame, real bottle flip, 1-2-3-4 stamps on the LIVE label
Panel drops out permanently
8
P3
NONE. No PDP frame, no button, no link chrome
Full-frame, bottle at chest, badge + two named stakes + end frame
— (continuous from Beat 7)
06Visual continuity audit
ONE performer, ONE wardrobe, ONE keyed home-wall plate across the entire board. The performer plate never changes location, lighting or framing family — only its scale within the composite changes (P1 bug → P2 MCU → P3 full-frame), and every scale change is a deliberate, listed move (VH2 satisfied via documented state changes rather than location cuts).
The performer-scale arc is the persuasion arc: she is small while the evidence is the argument (beats 3–5, the arithmetic), grows back as the register warms (beat 6), and owns the frame entirely once the argument has been handed to the viewer (beats 7–8). A single continuous wide take, cropped — never a re-shoot per state.
Panel-family arc, closed and legible: RETAIL (accuse) → PANEL (prove) → COMMERCE (demand) → NONE (verify + close). The panel never returns after beat 6, which is what makes the verification beat land as a handover rather than another slide.
Prop law held: exactly one physical object exists in the room — the real Kindled bottle. It enters at Beat 2, is turned in her hand at Beat 2, is flipped and counted at Beat 7, and is still in her hand at the end frame. Every competing artifact lives in the panel and is never touched. No frame ever shows her handling a competitor's bottle.
Circle continuity: the four highlighter circles drawn on the Kindled panel in Beat 3 persist unchanged into Beat 4's two-up. They are drawn once, on camera, and the audience remembers watching it — which is why "1 OF 4 JOBS." reads as arithmetic and not as a claim.
Colour discipline: the board is warm neutrals + flat evenly-lit panel captures, with saturated red reserved exclusively for the ✗/⚠️ verdicts (1A), the strike-through (4), and the iron circle + interference arrow (5). Red never appears anywhere else, so the Iron Tell is visibly the peak.
Hook seams: all three variants exit on the IDENTICAL P3 seam frame with the panel cleared and the bottle rising into hand, so any variant cuts onto Beat 2 with no re-introduction. 1C's mime-flip additionally motion-matches Beat 2's real bottle lift (the cleanest of the three).
Variant-conditional element, flagged once: Beat 5's corner thumbnail is a Hook-A callback on variant A and a plain third listing card on B/C. This is the board's ONLY variant-dependent body element — everything else in beats 2–8 is shared.
07Mute-test verification
First 5s: PASS on all three variants via Fork 4 strategy 1+2 (speaker face + on-screen text, enriched with the donor's composited-media grammar). A: permanent warning card at t=0 + three listing cards + ✗ ✗ ⚠️ stamps landing by t≈4.0s + continuous pointing. B: 6-tile shopping grid + "THE BACK-LABEL MATH" card at t≈1.5s + the "1 of 4?" tally by t≈5.5s. C: "3 SIGNS…" card at t=0.4s + three checklist stamps by t≈3.8s + the finger count. Donor's own verdict on this exact grammar: passes "with flying colors."
Hook OST specs + word counts (VS2, ≤12 words each): A "⚠️ DO NOT BUY THYROID DROPS" (5w) / "until you flip the bottle" (5w) — 10w total across the two-line card ✓ · B "THE BACK-LABEL MATH" (3w) + "1 of 4?" (3w) ✓ · C "3 SIGNS your thyroid supplement isn't working" (7w) + "TIRED ☑" / "COLD ☑" / "GAINING ☑" (1w each) ✓.
VS5 (asset survives the full 5s): A's warning card is permanent for the beat and the stamps land at 0.8 / 2.2 / 4.0s — continuous coverage ✓. B's grid runs t=0–4s, the card takes over at 1.5s and holds ✓. C's card is up at 0.4s and the checklist runs to 3.8s ✓.
U12 scan of every viewer-visible on-screen string:found + fixed 1. The script's Hook-A OST was written as one line containing an em dash ("⚠️ DO NOT BUY THYROID DROPS — until you flip the bottle") → recast as a two-line card, dash removed, wording otherwise unchanged. Full swept inventory, all dash-free: "⚠️ DO NOT BUY THYROID DROPS" · "until you flip the bottle" · "THE BACK-LABEL MATH" · "1 of 4?" · "3 SIGNS your thyroid supplement isn't working" · "TIRED ☑" · "COLD ☑" · "GAINING ☑" · "SAME FRONT. DIFFERENT BACK." · "1" "2" "3" "4" · "4 OF 4" · "1 OF 4 JOBS." · "IRON + LEVOTHYROXINE ✗" · "IT KEEPS SELLING OUT." · "30-DAY MONEY-BACK GUARANTEE" · "STILL TIRED?" · "STILL COLD?" · "EVERY DOLLAR BACK." Remaining em/en dashes: 0. ("BACK-LABEL", "30-DAY", "MONEY-BACK" are compound hyphens and stay; ✗ ⚠️ ☑ + are glyphs, not dashes.)
08Production-limitation cross-ref
production_limitations.md is a sparse skeleton (<3 non-template entries) → formal YS6 cross-check silent-skipped per the file's own heuristic (as recorded in the Research Brief: "no donor is SCAFFOLD-blocked on production grounds"). Tool-knowledge flags applied from avatar_tool_prompt_syntax.md + the real-shoot/composite routing:
Fork 1 rationale (the anti-AI call). This board is REAL-SHOOT-ONLY on the default path. The donor's grammar is saturated with exactly what AI render handles worst: constant pointing with the hand crossing a composite seam, a physical bottle flip that must frame-match a graphic flip, and a live sublingual-free but hand-forward prop performance through the entire back half. Speaker 3.5 also has no trained Soul ID on file. A Soul Cinema fallback exists — it would require a /higgsfield-soul-id training pass and would force restaging every pointing and prop beat — and it is degraded; flag to Zied before taking it.
Keying discipline is the shoot's #1 gate. Shoot FULL-TORSO with both hands clear of every frame edge so post can crop to P1/P2/P3 without amputating the pointing arm. ≥1.5m subject-to-screen separation, soft even key plus an edge/separation light so the matte holds on moving fingers. Wardrobe: nothing green, nothing patterned, no jewellery that flares.
Anti-studio constraint (review SOFT-6). The keyed background is a warm home-wall plate, home-lit, shallow depth. Studio seamless, beauty lighting and any presenter-set dressing are banned — speaker 3.5's Known-incompatible row is Solo × Studio.
Panel legibility gates ×4: Kindled supplement-facts macro (Beat 3 — the hard one; copy-stand flat macro, fallback = a label-true typeset recreation at larger scale), competitor facts crops (Beats 4, 5), retail listing cards (1A/1B — build at 2×, crop tight), live back-panel flip (Beat 7 — push in tighter rather than cutting to a crop).
Anonymity + fact discipline in every panel frame: competitor brand marks blurred/cropped; the Rx bottle label anonymized or blank; Beat 6 uses our own site only; prices blurred with a blur (never a black bar); zero invented numbers anywhere on screen — no stock counts, no review counts, no price, no percentage.
All on-screen text in POST — nothing burned in camera, including the permanent Hook-A warning card.
Two competitor panels required, not one (Beat 4 thin panel + Beat 5 iron-bearing panel), so a category verdict never narrows visually into a single-brand attack.
Pause/runtime discipline: both delivery tokens boarded as tight ≤0.8s holds (Beat 2's [pause], Beat 5's [beat]). Delivered A 81.2s (1.8s headroom) · B/C 79.8s (3.2s) against the 83s ceiling. No third pause may be added; editors must not pad; nothing is trimmed elsewhere to buy A margin (no-word-shaving rule). Prefer B or C where runtime pressure matters.
Speaker 3.5 casting: real 38–48 talent, educated peer register, comfortable pointing at nothing (she performs against a blank green wall and the panel is added later — brief her on where the panel lives, or tape sightline marks). Both 3.5 and 3.8 are UNTESTED on D11 — this run is also the combo's first test.
Variant-conditional deliverable: Beat 5's corner slot ships in two versions (A-callback / B-C plain). Three final cuts, one shared body, two beat-5 renders.
09Stitch-asset production matrix (S2-specific — every asset a real capture or practical macro)
Restock banner / add-to-cart tap / multi-bottle cart line
Own-site capture
Retina capture, crop down; zero numbers
MED
7
none (panel deliberately absent)
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8
30-day guarantee badge
Post graphic
Native-simple type badge, no seal/ribbon
HIGH (label truth)
10Tooling prompt index
Per-beat prompts collated above in real-shoot + composite syntax (production-team-facing shot list, per avatar_tool_prompt_syntax.md real-shoot conventions, extended with the STITCH_PANEL / PANEL_STATE / POINTING fields this format requires and the v2 per-beat schema does not model). Layer stack: real shoot (single performer, green screen, ONE continuous wide take per beat, cropped to state in post) · capture pass (listing screens, own-site frames) · macro pass (supplement-facts panels ×3, bottle cutouts, Rx bottle) · post (key + composite, panel choreography, all stamps/cards/badge, SFX, bed). NO AI generation layer on the default path. Degraded fallback (flag before use): Soul Cinema presenter — requires a /higgsfield-soul-id training pass for speaker 3.5 (none on file) and loses every pointing and prop beat.
11SOFT flags surfaced (operator review)
VS1 (B-roll density): panel content changes every 2–3s and the presenter jump-cuts on nearly every sentence — far ABOVE the 1-per-10s ceiling by design. CONFIRMED-INTENTIONAL, donor-faithful: the donor's measured grammar is "visual pops every 2–3 seconds," and in a stitch composite the panel is not B-roll interrupting a talking head, it is a continuously present co-star. The VS1 band does not model this layout.
VS6 (cross-adaptations):3 logged in-board — Hook 1B ← Anchor B (transparency-stunt candor-open kept, D03 staged-studio format rejected: it collides with speaker 3.5's Solo × Studio incompatibility); Hook 1C ← Anchor C (enumerated-checklist OST grammar kept, D01 costumed-authority register rejected: a credentialed voice kills this concept); global spine ← Anchor E (9:16 stitch geometry + product-to-lens kept, its 2-performer engine and rigid 50/50 split rejected). 1 logged at ROLE level — Anchor D is a static, copy-layer-only citation with its visual pattern excluded wholesale (§2c demotion, confirmed by the review's media verification).
VS3 / VS3b: every beat cites Anchor A or logs an original-direction rationale, and every panel cue in the matrix carries its anchor or rationale inline. Two declared original-direction calls: Beat 7's panel drop-out (calibrated to the verification persuasion goal) and Beat 8's two named-stake stamps (calibrated to executing the v1.1 copy fix visually).
Review SOFT-1 (the "Take it for a month." pronoun): not a storyboard defect, and mitigated visually — the bottle is on screen continuously through the entire close, so the referent has a picture. Named for the human: the review flags this as reasonably escalable to HARD with a +1-word fix; the copy is locked at v1.1 and this board changes zero words.
Review SOFT-5 (Beat 6's limp hinge): mitigated storyboard-side via the panel-family switch + hard cut landing on "Kindled keeps selling out." Copy untouched.
Review SOFT-6 (studio collision): boarded, not just noted — see the anti-studio ruling and cross-ref #3.
Review SOFT-7b (hook heading timing): resolved — Hook A boarded at its true 8.9s → 0:00–0:09.
Format-novelty flag (operator-level, not a rule violation): this is the account's first green-screen reaction stitch. The composite contract above is written to be executable with no in-house precedent, but the first cut should be QC'd specifically for the two failure modes this format has: (a) a pointing arm cropped at the seam, and (b) an eyeline that drifts to the panel.
12Pipeline update block (for kindled concept_pipeline.md — APPEND SKIPPED: echo run, handled at package)13Storyboard produced: 2026-07-27 — S2 Turn the Bottle Around via /storyboard-yapper (Echo run-3, adapted conventions)
Concept ID: S2 · CID: KD_C0080 (pre-allocated) Production Target: REAL SHOOT green-screen stitch (1 performer keyed + composited media panel; capture/macro asset pass; all text + composite in post; no AI layer on default path) Visual Style: donor-derived green-screen accusation composite (lymphoria D11 grammar, UGC-native plate) Comp Library Anchors: 1492572615705936 (DONOR/SEED, pinned), 1018924643817868, 1514909627007491, 2684523008388969 (static, copy-layer), 4114239875533382 (geometry ref) Mute-test: PASS (all 3 hook variants) Production-limitation flags: 10 (real-shoot-only pointing/prop actions, keying discipline, anti-studio constraint, panel legibility ×4, anonymity + no-invented-numbers, post-text, two competitor panels required, pause/runtime headroom, speaker combo test, variant-conditional beat-5 render)
**Adapted-convention / compat skips (flagged, not silently dropped):** Beat 1A/1B/1C hook variants · cumulative INTEGER M:SS contiguous timecodes on the Hook-A baseline (0:09; B/C bodies shift −1s) · CID KD_C0080 stamped at storyboard time (PRE-ALLOCATED per the E3/R3 convention — no mint-at-ship collision) · donor PINNED as anchor cornerstone with NO fresh comp query (run-order directive) · eight-beat discipline preserved incl. the UMS-before-UMPb inversion · composite-layer contract + per-beat panel/plate split added as a NEW board section (no v2 schema field models it) · all-practical asset matrix · SKIPPED per echo convention: rotation-log append (§2g), concept_pipeline append (7c), library_changes style-family log, Notion/board/publish (§7d) — "echo run — handled at package" · save path redirected to the Echo session tree.
14New contract findings (for the Echo build log)
The per-beat schema has no composite fields — this board invented them and they should be pinned. v2's per-beat "Shot type / B-roll cue / Avatar-tool prompt" triple assumes one production layer per beat and treats non-presenter imagery as interruption. A D11 stitch has two continuously co-present layers with an independent content clock. This board added Composite state / Stitch panel / Performer plate as first-class per-beat fields plus a three-state geometry vocabulary (P1/P2/P3) and a panel-content-family arc. E3's finding 2 (split-screen needs PRIMARY + B_ROLL + OVERLAY stacking) predicted this; S2 is the case that forces it. Recommend promoting the composite fields + the state vocabulary into avatar_tool_prompt_syntax.md as the named stitch-composite pattern before the next D11 board.
"Panel absence" is a boardable persuasion move. The strongest structural decision here is that the stitch panel drops out permanently at Beat 7, so the verification instruction is demonstrated with a real object in a real hand rather than on the same screen the ad has been accusing everyone with. That only reads as a move because the panel was relentlessly present for six beats. Worth naming as a general composite-format device: the co-star layer's exit is available as a beat, and it is cheapest exactly where the ad hands agency to the viewer.
Variant-conditional BODY elements exist and need a schema slot. Beat 5's corner callback pays off Hook A's third accusation — and is meaningless on the B/C cuts. The Echo 1×3 contract assumes hooks are interchangeable and the body is shared, but a SEED transposition whose hook plants a visual receipt creates a body element that is not variant-neutral. Handled here with an explicit two-render instruction; recommend the 1×3 contract gain a "variant-conditional body elements" declaration so this can never be discovered at edit time.
A second measured example of the delivery mode is worth an anchor slot even when it is not a content match. Anchor E (4114239875533382) contributes nothing to angle, mechanism or copy — it is in the set purely because it is the only other measured D11, and geometry precedent was the single thing this board most lacked. For a format the account has never shipped, "how is a 9:16 stitch divided" is a real anchor question. Recommend: when a board is the account's FIRST in a delivery mode, deliberately reserve one anchor slot for a same-mode geometry reference regardless of niche or angle fit.